Recently, I sold a fantasy short story to Aurora Wolf called, "Skarthonian Consequences." It is about the life and times of a knight called, Andromalius De'Grothic. They purchased it for their on-line site as well as adding it to their Anthology coming out this November. So, using 3WW and Flash Friday, I crafted this flash fiction to shamelessly plug it.
Enjoy.
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Sir Andromalius stood outside an old hut in the gathering mist of the morning. It started to rain. He stared at the draped animal skins covering the entrance knowing she was inside. The scent of herbs and dried meats teased his childhood memories. With a deep breath, he moved the skins aside and stepped in.
“Mother, I’m home.”
An old woman in tattered robes, hunched over a wooden table. She continued to cut vegetables and tossed them into a small caldron. A witch’s pentagram was etched on the caldron’s side as she mumbled softly.
“Mother. It’s me."
She kept cutting.
“Your son.”
She stopped and looked up with feeble eyes.
“My son is dead.”
Andromalius placed a gauntleted hand over her tiny hands.
“I’m not dead.“
She pulled her hands away and nodded towards his two swords.
“The knight’s sword with always serve you well. The other…”
“My death? How?”
She grabbed the caldron and hung it over a cooking fire.
Andromalius grabbed her by the shoulders and spun her around. “Answer me mother! Use your second sight. Look beyond the viel.”
She shrugged off his hands and sat down in an old wicker chair, a small wooden mug sloshed on a tiny table next to her. She reached into the folds of her robes and pinched a little powder into the mug, swirled it and then took a drink. She let the warmth of the potion move through her and her eyes rolled back.
“Mal’Rapture blesses you with power… and curses you to slay the ones you love. You will always be alone”, she predicted.
Andromalius drew the crystal blade. The firelight danced along its edges.
She looked at Andromalius, then the blade and gave a feeble smile.
“I love you, son.”
The sword felt heavy in his hand. He tilted the blade forward and liquid flowed though it’s mercurial channel. He looked up from the blade and then to her. He felt nothing. He sheaved the blade and left the hut, letting the skins flutter in the rain.
The rain stifled his mother’s tears. “Goodbye.”
Ouch! Being a mom, that one hurt, and took me by complete surprise. How sad that he is alone, with or without the sword. That was a twist I never expected, and a terrific insight on an intriguing character. You also accomplished a believable setting and two complete characters in very few words.
ReplyDeleteFrom the advantage of knowing Skarthonian Consequences (congratulations! can't wait to read it in print) I am happy you decided to pull aside the curtain and let me peek at his life in between events. There is much you can cover (or do I mean uncover?) in that space.
I'm impressed, Tim.
Plug, away, Tim, and I'm glad you've used 3WW to spark the story. This is a great peek into what you've written and sold (congrats, by the way), and I'm looking forward, like Peggy, to seeing your name in print, on real paper. You deserve it, my man.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on your sale! I shamelessly put existing characters into 3WW stories, so go on and show us more!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on the sale of your Mal'Rapture story!
ReplyDeleteThis piece is a cold and edgy peek into the greater picture. Killing without remorse, that blade has weaved its way into his head.
Congrats on the sale. You deserved it.
ReplyDeleteCongrats! I like it.
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Excellent story. It certainly plugs your sold story well (congrats!) because I sure want to read it now.
ReplyDeleteNice teaser for the full length story! Congrats on the sale!
ReplyDeleteFantastic - Glad I'm following - and you've sold it - well done and keep up the great work :)
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the sale and this is an excellent peek!
ReplyDeleteThis is an awesome little glimpse into your book. I'd to read it when it comes out! I hope you'll tweet when it's available. ;) Great job!
ReplyDeleteExcellent plug, and a great Flash. Congrats on the sale, I'll keep an eye out for it.
ReplyDeleteBrisk and sad. Hope the book is coming along well!
ReplyDeleteSecond blog today I found with a wormhole in the banner? What are the odds? I should go to Las Vegas this weekend with the mortgage money. I'm feely lucky.
ReplyDeleteStephen Tremp
Congrats on your sale. If this small scene into your character is any indication, your story bodes well and I look forward to reading more. Really excellent writing. Peace...
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the sale!
ReplyDeleteYou have me very intrigued by the crystal blade, the imagery is going to stay with me a while
Congrats on the story!
ReplyDeleteThis is edgy and gives an indication of the milieu. Looking forward to reading more.